8 short answers; this is for the selection as peer leader in the school who would mentor the incoming freshmen. next year the writing should highlight the enthusiasm, leadership qualities & mentoring/caring nature

8 short answers; this is for the selection as peer leader in the school who would mentor the incoming freshmen. next year the writing should highlight the enthusiasm, leadership qualities & mentoring/caring nature

8 short answers; this is for the selection as peer leader in the school who would mentor the incoming freshmen. next year the writing should highlight the enthusiasm, leadership qualities & mentoring/caring nature;
please edit all essays to be in formal english since this is a competition.